Black Thought

What's good Aspiring Author? I'm the Bad Narrator and you'll be my reviewee today. I like the idea of the story, but if I were gonna change just one thing ...

Still, it'd suck to have one of those land on your head or something. Ahahaha it'd suck to have one of those be within 50 feet of my person. Where ...

Whoa...dude...um...what sort of a spider is that? It's called a golden orb weaver. Their webs are high in protein which makes them strong enough to catch large prey (like birds ...

Another Asher Levy Vignette. We're about to get into some...some things... When I was eight years old there was this kid, I don’t remember his name, something Irish sounding I ...

Plus there are giant bugs in the rain forest. Can you imagine finding a huge spider in your tent or something? Or having one fall on your head while you ...

So I tried to post a reply earlier and I kept getting an "account suspension" page. Not sure if this is a bug or one of you mods is trying ...

So I tried to post a reply earlier and I kept getting an "account suspension" page. Not sure if this is a bug or one of you mods is trying ...

Hello Whisper, I'll be your reviewer today. So I'm trying to hear the voice of the narrator in my head and I'm getting this bland generic robot voice or something. ...

This is a little flash fiction piece I wrote as an exercise to help develop my characters voice in narration. I'm trying to maintain a distinct voice while at the ...

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The voice doesn't sound very authentic in my opinion. "better than any Ecstasy pill or dose of meth I had ever taken" doesn't sound like something a drug addict would ...

Hello Moriah. I will be your narrator today. Structure: This story is lacking dramatic structure (Expo => Rising action => climax => falling action => Deno) which gives the impression ...

The film is based on the novel adaption "The Wild Things" by Dave Eggers. Not the famous children's book itself. Which is why the film deals with so much adult ...